Kimi K 2.6 editing test

Missed · 21

• Grammar & spellingwho, not whom: subject of 'was'“whom she guessed was the owner”
• Grammar & spellingCompares a hand with a person: her grandfather's“far easier to read than her grandfather”
• Grammar & spellingany other shop: the bakery is on Wharf Street“longer than any shop on Wharf Street”
• Grammar & spellingFragment: the survey has no verb“The survey from twelve years ago, which an engineer from the county”
• Grammar & spellingRestrictive clause, no commas: the entries that held“The entries, which held only a single word, were”
• Grammar & spellingin to, not into“turned his uniform into the quartermaster”
• RepetitionsClose: neatly … neat“neatly labeled”
• RepetitionsDistinctive, chapters apart: gleaming“a gleaming pair of shoes”
• RepetitionsDistinctive, chapters apart: sodden“carrying sodden leaves”
• RepetitionsClose: whispered … whispered“he whispered, as if it were a secret”
• RepetitionsDistinctive, chapters apart: stubbornly“which stuck stubbornly”
• RepetitionsClose: remembered … memory“her hands remembered”
• Redundancytwins are two“the two twins”
• Redundancyan agreement is mutual“By mutual agreement”
• Redundancyplanning is in advance“no advance planning”
• Redundancya haven is safe“a safe haven”
• Redundancybegan is first“the week we first began”
• ConsistencyThe bakery has three tables; she sits at the fourth“three small tables”
• ConsistencyFuneral in February, death in March“had died in March”
• ConsistencyDaniel is younger, yet born a year before her“her younger brother, Daniel”
• ConsistencyTomas beside him: two decades, then thirty years“for most of two decades”