GLM 5.3 editing test

Missed · 12

• Grammar & spellingany other shop: the bakery is on Wharf Street“longer than any shop on Wharf Street”
• Grammar & spellingFragment: the survey has no verb“The survey from twelve years ago, which an engineer from the county”
• Grammar & spellingRestrictive clause, no commas: the entries that held“The entries, which held only a single word, were”
• Grammar & spellingPast tense: led“Nora lead the way upstairs”
• RepetitionsDistinctive, chapters apart: brittle“a short, brittle sound”
• RepetitionsDistinctive, chapters apart: stubbornly“which stuck stubbornly”
• RepetitionsClose: remembered … memory“her hands remembered”
• Redundancyan agreement is mutual“By mutual agreement”
• Redundancybegan is first“the week we first began”
• Redundancyjoin together“wants them to join together”
• ConsistencyThe bakery has three tables; she sits at the fourth“three small tables”
• ConsistencyThe bakery: two doors down, then a ten-minute walk“BAKERY TWO DOORS DOWN”